Student's Self Assessment. Teacher's Assessment. Year 7 Write That Essay Scorecard. Not Yet Sometimes Consistently Not Yet Sometimes Consistently Student's Name: 0 1 2 0 1 2 Key Skills 1) Can deliver a 300-word piece of writing 2 2 2) Writes 3 or more sentences to expand an idea 2 2 3) In total, can write using 5 sentence styles 2 2 Plan 4) In planning, can generate 4 ideas about a topic 2 2 5) Can select and use relevant ideas 2 1 6) Can plan a piece of writing and rank ideas 2 2 Output 7) On average, can control sentences to 20 words or less 2 2 Paragraphs 8) Supports ideas using relevant information i.e. facts and figures 1 1 9) Writes the multi-purpose introduction paragraph 1 2 10) Routinely uses 3 sentence styles per body paragraph 1 1 11) Demonstrates mastery of 2 different body paragraph structures (80-100 words per paragraph) 2 2 12 Can write a Robust Conclusion paragraph) 0 1 Precision 13) Controlled use of 3 different language features 1 1 14) Uses precise vocabulary 1 2 Spelling, Punctuation, Grammar 15) Spells commonly used words correctly 1 2 16) Correctly uses capital letters and end of sentence markers 90% of the time 2 2 17) Can use a range of advanced punctuation correctly, ; -- “ 1 1 18) Writes using grammatically correct and complete sentences 1 1 Edit 19) Makes improvements to work after peer editing or teacher conferencing 2 2 Purpose 20) Can write to engage intended audience 2 2 0 8 22 Sum 0 8 22 0 7 26 Total Score out of 30/40 30 33 Student reflection: I think I did preaty good for my stage. I used about 3 styles per paragraf and had 7 or more sentence starters. My avrage words written was 466, sentence lenth is awsome and over all I had 84% which is great for me. In my other writhings I didnt had problem with precision but it didnt gone wellin this time so I try to inprove in this next time. by Sebastian Arciszewski Teacher Comment: Fantastic work! This is a well thoughtout and written essay. Your points of arguement are clear and you have information to support and explain your points.There are some small errors with grammar and punctuation, however, this does not effect the arguement that you are trying to make. When editing just double or even triple check you have full stops captial letter in the correct spaces. Also that your sentences are not too long and lose their meaning. One thing to work on is try to use more advanced puncutation and check you have commas in your sentence when they are needed. Teacher Comment: Fantastic work! This is a well thoughtout and written essay. Your points of arguement are clear and you have information to support and explain your points.There are some small errors with grammar and punctuation, however, this does not effect the arguement that you are trying to make. When editing just double or even triple check you have full stops captial letter in the correct spaces. Also that your sentences are not too long and lose their meaning. One thing to work on is try to use more advanced puncutation and check you have commas in your sentence when they are needed.